This next scene I mixed together some Esmonde drinking experiences as well as one of my own for fun. This scene is critical to Jack solving his first puzzle and it was pretty run to watch.
I am really looking forward to writing with everyone this weekend it should be really really fun!
Jack arrived home relatively early for him at 12:45. Surprising he had no girl with him. But Marcus could smell the strong odour of vodka of his breath across the room. He was barely able to stand let alone walk. Marcus hurried over to Jack who nearly passed out onto the floor.
He pulled him to his bedroom and got him the largest bucket he could. It was a pale blue bucket Marcus would have sworn they had chugged beers from before. In any case it was perfect for vomiting.
Marcus didn’t usually stay will vomiting victims but tonight was an unusual case. He had never seen Jack like this (and they had been through some rough shit before) he could not hold his head up to vomit. Marcus was certain that if Jack was still in school he would have been escorted home by SERT.
As it turned out, tonight, Jack would be winning the Golden Bowl Trophy. Marcus stayed by Jack’s side for almost three hours as he went in and out of consciousness. Jack would on and on about how he needed to sleep because he needed to get to his job the next morning on Sea Otter Lane. When Marcus would ask Jack about his job, he would pull out his credit card and recite his PIN as if he needed to pay for something. It didn’t make any sense to Marcus but he laughed all the same and assured Jack that he would be just fine the next day to work at Sea Otter Lane.
Jack continued to rhyme off his PIN, 7, 3, 9, 9. Finally Marcus grew a little tired and quizzed jack about the numbers about what the meant.
“They spell something stupid.” With a lisp so bad and hilarious Marcus prayed it would be permanent.
“Well what does it spell for you?” Marcus asked
“Sexy!” Jack said with a wink, but it came out more like ssexeh!
Marcus laughed, “of course is that because you are sexeh or because money is.”
Jack arrogant even while drunk, “Me because I make the money and the girls find that sexeh!”
Thursday, June 11, 2009
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What is this mysterious 7399 about? Looking forward to the revelation. Which of the drinking experiences is your own?
ReplyDeletesea otter lane and the credit card belongs to scott
ReplyDeleteI have a guess about a link between Jack's comments about 7399, and Marcus solving the sudoku puzzles... but I don't want to put a spoiler in the comments, and I could be wrong.
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